Could there possibly be a right way?
Saying goodbye to someone you loved once yesterday
Who brought shine when the skies were grey
Who would lay yellow brick so you find your way
But really, how could you expect me to stay
How were we suppose to sail when you kept me at bay
Yet, I stay afloat
One morning i awoke
Had to clear my throat
Looked over to the table, found a note that you wrote
And i quote...
"I'm writing this to tell you that you were always there
No doubt about it, you showed me that you care
Everytime i was lost, your love shot a flare
Thought you were like the rest, it's obvious your rare
But then came along, that feeling of despair
Im sure you were aware
You? no one compares
I'll never forget, the times that we share
And forever i will keep you in my prayer
I swear
Love, Claire"
To Be Continued...
Whos claire?
ReplyDeleteLOL nah, really great poem. U have talent!
ReplyDeletethat poem touched me right in the heart. Im feelin that poem
ReplyDelete"Yet I stay afloat" --- great line, ship metaphor. Also, I like the way you begin the poem with a question that pulls the reader in but is not obvious. Also like the yellow brick road to find his way idea....looking forward to the rest.
ReplyDeletegud shit.. i like the concept and that whole " i qoute " shit that was nice
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